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the curious and the cranky by ~southpawmac:iconsouthpawmac:





How do you know when to stop beating?

I stop beating when you stop breathing.

Broken and yet still working?

Never whole to begin with. Rhyming.                                    lol.


Don’t you ever get tired?

Damn you, I do but I can't just retire.

So then can you be fired?

Hearts just exist, we are not hired!


You are vulnerable and too cranky

I am stronger than you’ll ever be

But you beat, I breathe, we’re one

We were, til you gave me away to that man.


©2008-2010 ~southpawmac
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Author's Comments

lubdub lubdub...

italicized lines: the heart


this is an interview with my very own cranky heart.
yep. stupid title.

this is the weirdest i have ever ever written. ever.

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:icondramallamaless:
its a beautiful piece :)
:iconsouthpawmac:
:aww: thank you. glad you think so. :glomp:

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:iconborn-again-anarchist:
Loving your weirdness :heart:

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That's love isn't it, a load of old wank
:iconsouthpawmac:
awww thank you :hug:

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:iconblackittyrose004:
Very cool piece! I like what you've done here! :D

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:iconsouthpawmac:
:w00t!: really glad you think so! thank you. :glomp:

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:iconth3krimzon1:
Tis awesomenesss! :D

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:iconsouthpawmac:
wow really? thanks. :)

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